Needs editing and proofreading The story and plot is okay The idea is good, but it reads like a first, rough draft. Alternate Cover Edition For Avery Powell, The Son Of Prime Minister Markus Powell A Contract Killer In The Army, He Must Kill Those His Father Thinks Of As A Threat To The Crown When He Gets A Contract To Kill A Boy He Loves, Will He Do It Or Choose To Spare The Boys Life Whatever He Chooses, There Will Always Be Consequences I wanted to like this I really did The concept of a future where society has moved backward and a young man must stand up against his family in spite of that could be a very interesting read But there are some problems here in terms of editing, continuity, and world building How did things get there One morning a man woke up and decided only White men should have any rights Was there no struggle It just seemed like it was all tossed out rather abruptly And then the interactions between the characters, their motivations, and their development just didn t seem to follow an arc that I could really understand as a reader Unfortunately, this just didn t work for me at all. It s what Canada 2250 And Slavery was reintroduced into the country African Americans, Native Americans, Chinese Americans and children were all forced to work for little to nothing of pay Women had all their rights taken away and were left in a dismal state of property, just like it was back in the 1800 s Homosexuality was outlawed and out laws would put any of those who were to death The country spiralled backwards by 300 years in the span of two years um. awesome book, really enjoyed it, looking forward to the next one, a MUST read
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